Saturday, 23 March 2013

Research

Thomas Gainsborough 14 May 1727 – 2 August 1788

Gainsborough painted with speed, and spent time observing nature, he preferred to paint landscapes and this is why he often merged the figures into the lanscape. He used a light palette and his brushstrokes are distinctive and are sometimes described as economical strokes.[

This portrait is the masterpiece of Gainsborough's early years. It was painted after his return home from London to Suffolk in 1748, soon after the marriage of Robert Andrews of the Auberies and Frances Carter of Ballingdon House, near Sudbury, in November of that year.

The landscape evokes Robert Andrews's estate, to which his marriage added property. He has a gun under his arm, while his wife sits on an elaborate
Rococo-style wooden bench. The painting of Mrs Andrews's lap is unfinished. The space may have been reserved for a child for Mrs Andrews to hold.

The painting follows the fashionable convention of the conversation piece, a (usually) small-scale portrait showing two or more people, often out of doors. The emphasis on the landscape here allows Gainsborough to display his skills as a painter of convincingly changing weather and naturalistic scenery, still a novelty at this time.


http://www.nationalgallery.org.uk/paintings/thomas-gainsborough-mr-and-mrs-andrews

 

 


I find this painting beautiful, and the irony of fake romance and all about privilage, pride, money and status. The landscape and the idea of extra land by marriage is clearly defined.
The portraiture style of this period compared to portraits of today is completely different, because contemporary portraits seem to be about the person not about their status, but more about the perception of the sitter and how the viewer see's the portrait.


Margaret Burr (1728–1797), This is a painting by Gainsborough of his wife, the tonal quality and the details which I am interested in the detail is something I would like to consider within my work, the composition of this painting is the normal style, and something I need to explore and and expand and keeping the work centralised is an area I need to change within my work.


Another artist I have been looking at is Rembrandt Harmenszoon van Rijn (15th July 1606 - 4th Oct 1669) One of the greatest artists in European art history and very important in Dutch history.
 




 
 
The influence of Caravaggio is evident in Rembrandt's work from the 1630s. He developed a new way of describing faces with patterns of light and shadow, rather than simply lighting one side and shading the other. Shadows around the eyes of his portraits, making it hard to read a precise expression give his canvases the extraordinary impression of the living, thinking mind behind the face.
This is clearly shown in the portrait of ' Bearded man wearing a cap' Late 1650's

 

This is one of a group of studies from life made by Rembrandt in the late 1650s. The last digit of the date is almost illegible, but may be a '7'. The painting falls into the category of 'tronies' (literally, heads). Although the artist most certainly used a model, the identity of the sitter is irrelevant. These works were intended as character studies, or as representations of a person in a particular role. In the 17th century, collectors appreciated them for the portrayal of particular facial aspects. 
 
 
A Woman bathing in a Stream (Hendrickje Stoffels?)1654, Rembrandt
The model is probably Hendrickje Stoffels (about 1625/6 - 1663). She lived in Rembrandt's household from about 1649 until her death. She became his common-law wife and bore him a daughter, Cornelia, who was baptised on 30 October 1654 (the year of this painting).
It has been suggested that the sumptuous red robe on the river bank indicates that the painting might be a sketch for a religious or mythological picture; the model might be in the guise of an Old Testament heroine, such as Susanna or Bathsheba, or the goddess Diana, who were all spied upon by men while bathing. However, there is no evidence for a completed painting after this work and, moreover, Rembrandt did not use oil sketches as preparation for larger-scale paintings.
The handling of the paint is unusually spontaneous. The picture appears unfinished in some parts, for example, in the shadow at the hem of the raised chemise, the right arm and the left shoulder, but it was clearly finished to Rembrandt's satisfaction since he signed and dated it.
 
 
Portrait of Margaretha de Geer, Wife of Jacob Trip about 1661, Rembrandt
 This somber and imposing portrait, dating from the last decade of Rembrandt's life, depicts Margaretha de Geer, wife of the wealthy Dordrecht merchant Jacob Trip.
Margaretha is portrayed with great honesty. She confronts the viewer directly and her age shows clearly in her hands and face. Not untypical for a woman of her generation and age she wears old-fashioned clothes: the large ruff had been fashionable forty years earlier, in the 1620s.
One notable aspect of Rembrants later paintings is the use of broad brushstrokes, sometimes applied with a palette knife. While the earlier pictures had a smooth finish, the later works are designed to work only from a distance.
 
 
Ewan Uglow (1932 - 2000)    
 
Most people who have the opportunity to look for hours at one painting by Uglow find their eyes traveling over the surface, perplexed that marks, shadows and forms so limpid could crystalize conflicted emotions. The painter John McLean wrote, ‘These planes of Uglow stand for colour changes perceived with a keenness on might have said bordered on the hallucinatory, there it not reality that was in focus … His observation is so exquisite each discrete plane, each color rings out, like a note in a finely delivered song. The planes coalesce just like such sounds… This surface of a Uglow painting is beautiful. The frankness with which it reveals its constructions resonates as you read the continuum of form and space’.”
From Catherine Lampert Uglow in his earthly observatory. pixxi
Euan Uglow: The Complete Paintings, Catalogue raisonne by Catherine Lampert.
 
 
Curled nude on a stool 1982-3 Oil on canvas 30 x 39 in - Ewan Uglow
 
The majority of Uglow’s rare statements on his art have been extracted from interviews. With their aid, one can visualize the artist sitting in front of the organic subject, light reflected off the back wall, the wires and a plumb line defining the plane that demarcates their separate territory. ‘I take measurements so that the subject has a real link to the rectangle; it also gives me freedom to make a whole surface… I’m painting an idea not an ideal. Basically I’m trying to paint a structured painting full of controlled, and therefore potent, emotion. His attitude to mark-making and surface owed to the Old Masters but also much to Mondrian and William Coldstream, as well as to American abstract painter, particular Rothko and Newman.: ‘I don’t do wristy paintings because I want the brain to intervene between the observation and the mark;’ ‘Sometimes I like a painting to be like [the keys off] a typewriter going across the whole surface. A close friend, Georgia Georgallas, recalled a familiar expression; ‘The words he always used to say: “it’s got to have magic”. And the only way he could think of creating this “magic” was to be true to himself. He was ruthless with himself.’”
From Catherine Lampert Uglow in his earthly observatory. piiii — Euan Uglow The Complete Paintings.

http://paintingperceptions.com/figure-painting/euan-uglow


The measured marks of Uglow's work are what defines his work not only his practice but what drove him, his planes of almost blocked colours feel like a reminder of Picasso, but are softened not only in colour but texture. his work is stunning but the precison of his work scares me abit! I can't really explain why, but maybe its to do with the fact that I could not paint that way I wouldn't feel comforted by that.

The website in which I have gathered quotes from which is shown above has to be one of the most interesting and useful research websites I have found so far, its abit like the work of Uglow it holds the viewer's interest!

I am reading and I am inspired by Francis Bacon(28 October 1909 – 28 April 1992) he is an artist that has always been an inspiration to me and a the quote below really sums up what I am trying to achieve in my work at the moment from the book The Brutality of of Fact- Interviews with Francis Bacon. 

"What has never been analysed is why this particular way of painting is more poignant than illustration. I suppose because it has a life completely of its own. It lives on its own, like the image oe's trying to trap: it lives on its own, and therefore transfers the essence of the image more poignantly. So the artist maybe able to open up or rather, should I say, unlock the valves of feeling and therefore return the onlooker to life more violently".(17:1987).


“Haunted and obsessed by the image … by its perfection, 112 Bacon sought to reinvent Velázquez’s Portrait of Pope Innocent X in the papal portraits that form the focus of this book. In the great painting from the Des Moines Art Center, the Study after Velazquez’s Portrait of Pope Innocent X, Bacon updates the seventeenth‑century image by transforming the Spanish artist’s confident client and relaxed leader into a screaming victim. Trapped as if manacled to an electric chair, the ludicrously drag‑attired subject is jolted into involuntary motion by external forces or internal psychoses. The eternal quiet of Velázquez’s Innocent is replaced by the involuntary cry of Bacon’s anonymous, unwitting, tortured occupant of the hot seat. One could hardly conceive of a more devastating depiction of postwar, existential angst or a more convincing denial of faith in the era that exemplified Nietzsche’s declaration that God is dead.
In Bacon’s words: “Great art is always a way of concentrating, reinventing what is called fact, what we know of our existence‑a reconcentration… tearing away the veils that fact acquires through time. Ideas always acquire appearance veils, the attitudes people acquire of their time and earlier time. Really good artists tear down those veils.”’

http://www.francis-bacon.com/exhibitions/?c=The-Papal-Portraits-of-1953

Diego Rodríguez de Silva y Velázquez (June 6th 1599 - August 6th 1660) The Spanish painter who was the leading artist in the court of King Philip IV. He was an individualistic artist of the contemporary Baroque period, important as a portrait artist
 
Time and criticism have now fully established his reputation as one of the most consummate of painters, and accordingly John Ruskin says of him that "everything Velazquez does may be taken as absolutely right by the student." At the present day his marvellous technique and strong individuality have given him a power in European art such as is exercised by no other of the old masters. Although acquainted with all the Italian schools, and the friend of the foremost painters of his day, he was strong enough to withstand every external influence and to work out for himself the development of his own nature and his own principles of art. A realist of the realists, he painted only what he saw; consequently his imagination seems limited. His religious conceptions are of the earth earthy, although some of his works, such as the "Crucifixion" and the "Christ at the Column", are characterized by an intensity of pathos in which he ranks second to no painter. His men and women seem to breathe, his horses are full of action and his dogs of life, so quick and close is his grasp of his subject.
 
 
 
Crucifixion 1632 by Diego Velazquez
 
 
Through his weak posture and expression of hopelessness, this  weakened Christ is showing the fatal signs of exhaustion and excruciating pain. Does he regret his position? But there does not seem to be pity for himself for he knows that his actions are leading to the benefit of his people.









Sunday, 3 March 2013

Tumblr

I am continuing to look at the idea of identity within my work, however I have extended the concept of Identity by exploring the use of Tumblr.

My daughter and others seem to use Tumblr for many reasons, as a diary, to advertise their work, and for personal reasons, according to Emma, she uses her Tumblr account to be herself through imagery, and limited text, her site is a visual record of how she feels, her values and interests. Furthermore Emma feels that she is not judged and she fits in.. I find this fascinating, that by creating a site in which everybody can view and reflecting on these expressions of herself (I do have parental control).

Tumblr is different from Facebook, I use Facebook to record day to day events and to share my work, and interests through text and photographs for my friends and family to keep in contact, whereas Tumblr is so different more obscure in a way.

So Emma has contacted some of the people who are followers of her Tumblr site and certain individuals have allowed me to see their images and photographs of their Tumblr page and to use images as well, which is amazing because these individuals are all exploring their identities and their lives through these images.

One such person has this image where she is seated on a doorstep, and this is an image that I have taken to create a piece of work.
This particular individual is a student and is studying fashion design, her style is very individual and she is confident in that developing style which is based mainly 1950's retro style.

The piece I wanted to create was to look at the composition of the figure in the piece.

 
 
The colours I have used are vibrant, and I look at this piece and believe that tonally restricting the colour would have made a more interesting piece.   

 
 
 
I found the finished piece a good beginning because I feel that the piece should have been more controlled in the use of the colour and I feel a limited palette would change the impact of the painting.  


Looking and studying this piece I am interested in reworking the piece, because compositionally I feel the cramped space in which the figure is placed and expanse away from the individual, creates a interesting image that for me personally works, however would a limited palette produce a more interesting, arresting image.

I have just finished another piece and this work shows how the limited palette has created a completely different feel to the atmosphere.



 This piece is created on a reused canvas, which I have sanded back the old image and then primed the canvas. The reason I chose this canvas is because its damaged and feel used and abit battered.



As in this piece and most work I create, I work on the area of main focus and then outwards onto the background, I then dip back and forth between the figure and background, or the background is at times completely left until the figure or area of interest is completed.
I know that this is working back to front as most teachers and artists state that an artist or anybody creating a piece of work, they should work the background to the fore,




Hands and feet are areas I really struggle with, and I have to spend a lot of time study the physical aspect of the form, and I have to picture where the muscles, tendons and skeletal elements are, and then the tonal qualities have to be taken into account.


Often I have to turn the canvas around especially with areas such as the hands as shown above, in doing this I can figure out the dimensions easier.



Tonally this piece is sombre and I am very interested in exploring how less in more when taking into consideration the tonal aspect of work and how reducing the amound of colour introduced and a limited palette changes the atmosphere of the piece.


The image above does not clearly show how I have left the linear marks of how I use pencil to sketch out the figure, I have done this as it adds an interesting to the piece, this creates the sense that this is a painting and not just a portrait of somebody.
The artist Gerhard Richter in his work has often kept in the linear marks created especially within his portraiture works. **Need to find info that backs this claim from one of his exhibitions!!!**
 
  
I am pleased with the result of this piece, I realise that compositionally the piece is traditional, however the piece does reflect an individual constricted within the confines of the edges of the canvas. 
This piece compared to the first painting I feel is more evocative and even though it is more conventional in its composition, it is a stronger piece, and with this in mind I will recreate the first piece which tonally will be more muted and use a limited palette.  

In the never-ending debate between blogging and micro-blogging, Tumblr usually gets lumped in with Twitter and Facebook on the micro-blogging side. But Tumblr is actually somewhere in between the status bursts of Twitter and Facebook and the long-form publishing of WordPress-style blogs. If anything, it is more accurately described as micro-blogging than Twitter or Facebook because you actually produce short blog posts filled with images, links, and videos. But the key to Tumblr’s incredible growth—it’s adding a quarter billion pageviews a week—is how easy it makes it to post something and reblog what your friends are posting.
Tumblr CEO David Karp recently sat down with Chris Dixon for a Founder Stories interview in which explains how he started Tumblr four years ago as a reaction to other blogging tools out there. “All blogs took the same form,” he notes. “I wanted something much more free-form, much less verbose.” People wanted to express themselves and blog, but he felt that the standard blogging platforms available at the time—Wordpress, Blogger, TypePad—were too complicated. “These tools I just don’t think worked for most people. It’s a commitment, you need to sit down for an hour and hammer out a post.”
He is quick to add that “WordPress is the best tool in the world for that” kind of publishing. But for someone like him who “doesn’t enjoy writing,” it was the wrong tool. So he created Tumblr instead, which is designed to help people get their thoughts and images up as quickly as possible, and to lower the barrier to publishing even more.
But don’t Twitter and Facebook lower those barriers even further? They do, but they lack a strong expressive identity, argues Karp. “They are not tools built for creative expression,” he says, adding: “Nobody is proud of their identity on Facebook.” Okay, he’s got a point there. Tumblr, in contrast, is built to be a place you can be proud to call your online home. It’s very design-oriented and you can customize your Tumblr to reflect your personality, but not in a cheesy MySpace way. For Twitter and Facebook, “expression isn’t necessarily something they care about.”

http://techcrunch.com/2011/02/21/founder-stories-why-david-karp-started-tumblr-blogs-dont-work-for-most-people/


Tumblr is a re-envisioning of tumblelogging, a subset of blogging that uses quick, mixed-media posts. The service hopes to do for the tumblelog what services like LiveJournal and Blogger did for the blog. The difference is that its extreme simplicity will make luring users a far easier task than acquiring users for traditional weblogging. Anytime a user sees something interesting online, they can click a quick “Share on Tumblr” bookmarklet that then tumbles the snippet directly.

http://fuckyeahconceptart.tumblr.com/
Click-through for Artist Info.
concept art :: a form of illustration where the main goal is to convey a visual representation of a design, idea, and/or mood for use in movies, video games, animation, or comic books before it is put into the final product. Concept art is also referred to as visual development and/or concept design. This is a tumblr dedicated to concept art, with an emphasis on the skilled artists who created them.

So Tumlbr is a blogging platform that seems to have learned a lot from the mistakes of others. Tumblr is for that people want a simple, clean, and easy way to post anything they find inspiring or worth sharing, whether it's a picture, song, quote, opinion, or video clip.


http://www.businessinsider.com/how-to-use-tumblr-2011-5?op=1

This page gives a step by step guide into setting up a Tumblr account.


Discussion regarding Tumblr found at http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=tumblr




You just won't understand.
Tumblr is life and culture.
It is the epitome of culture and the total antithesis of the modern day pop culture which is so ingrained in today's children. There is no possible way to explain such a phenomenon to others.
You either get it or you don't.
A discrete website for interesting yet random people, where you can express yourself without being judged. You can post whatever you like, whenever you like. Not everyone understands tumblr, so don't worry about idiots from school/work/anywhere to be joining.
Tumblr is freedom.
A place where you can express yourself, where no one will judge you. You can reblog anything you want. You can tell your followers anything. Its basically a place to vent, and for whoever will listen. It's very time consuming, because it's more than amazing. You'll find yourself on it more than talking to people. and hanging out with friends. It's a place to be free.
I love tumblr. It's the only place I can be myself.
That's what everyone will say about it.
You don't speak of tumblr at school,
with your friends or family.



Tumblr.com is a place for you to get away
from reality.


You'll regret asking anyone you know to join it.
If your homophobic, you won't last long on tumblr
considering most people on tumblr are either gay,
bi, lesbian or support them.


You can say anything you want on tumblr and not get

judged for it because most people will feel the same way.

Facebook is very judgy.
Tumblr. Is completely different.

There are super cool blogs, and you should check them out.

If you like something, press 'Reblog' (it'll be on your blog)
or the heart. (its like the facebook like)

Reblogging is a way to put the picture/audio/quote on YOUR blog but give the original person who post it up credit.

Also, there are really cool themes for customizing.

You can also add music to your blog.

tumblr-layouts.tumblr.com ^^ that will give you all the extra features. you can figure the rest out. but when you sign up,
the url will be like this:___(whatever you want)____.tumblr.com

you can make your url really cheesy and cute like
(btw, these arent real blogs) :
loveforeverxx.tumblr.com or straight up like your name: amy11293.tumblr.com

be creative, and have fun!
Tumblr is a magical place. It's a place you can go to whenever you are feeling sad or lonely or simply unable to cope with real life. It's a place for dreamers and believers and overly obsessive people to unite and talk and vent and rant and best of all, it's a place where you can just be yourself and not be judged. The only downside to tumblr, it's terribly addictive.
Hipster society of hatred and self- admiration. Totally ironic. They hate facebook even though every single one of them has one. Like to post pictures of cats, themselves, and obscure bands. Youre not supposed to speak of tumblr, but its a public diary. Its as ironic as the fake handlebar mustaches they sport.
A Site that Facebookers are not aloud on.
People say it is just a site. It is not. It's a cult!
The easiest blog hosting site to manage on the web where you meet great people, fellow Losties, hispsters, and more. We use tumblr slang that may throw off the non believers who have no business being there. Also, we tend to express ourselves through hilarious GIFS that may look obnoxious to outsiders. Essentially, Tumblr is the 2nd best place after Hogwarts that only asks you to give up sleeping, a social life, and your soul before you can be graced by it's awesomness. It's not for everyone.
    
    

Animal Portraits

I had been asked to create a piece that was reflective of the horse portrait that I created before starting the MA.


 
I find it interesting that people like these type of paintings, I do believe it's because it's unusual and different, I enjoy this type of work because painting animals is such a pleasure, due to the tonal elements and especially within this structural elements of the pieces. I have to use photoshop to morph the images so I can created this combination. 




I was asked to create a portrait for friends of my parents, for which I was paid, the photograph came through the post, 4 x 6.
The piece was worked on a small linen canvas which I have never used before, however I found the contrast between linen and cotton a pleasant change.

 
 
I put the work I create onto Facebook, just so that people can see what I do. From placing this image on Facebook I did get a commission of painting a cow! Which I was delighted to do, any extra income is always welcome.
 
    
 
    

2.1 Reflective Practice

Outline of Study Plan.

Review: What Worked Well.

The use of different mediums rather than concentrating on painting, by working in different ways I have been able to gain a stronger understanding of composition within the work, and how composition can be manipulated and used to produce pieces that move away from the idea of a classic portraiture style.

Furthermore the use of photography and the use of inks allowed experiments into colour and depth, and the reflection of light and shadow influenced the imagery.

Mark making into the photographs has given me thought on how the paintbrush creates mark making, in the nature of the instrument itself and the actual materials involved within creating a piece of work.

Working through the difficult periods by creating imagery either by photography, sketches, I found continued ways of creating work.

What didn't work so well?

The loss of Emma Bulley from the course created a sense of turmoil and I found it a really disruptive time in regards to the course, and I found this period very hard to concentrate and to create work for the MA.
The paintings I produced were not up to standard and I really struggled to be creative and it took time before I could find a way of creating imagery.
Furthermore my academic writing is my main area of weakness, I can express myself verbally but I do struggle writing in that expressive way. 

What were the big shifts?
The major shifts came once I started to use photography as a creative process, and continued to use inks as a medium. Combining the photography and the inks as well as concentrating on mark making helped me to focus and enabled an unlimited medium to work with as I could print the images and rework into them using different equipment and mediums. 

 
What do you wish you’d done but you didn’t?

The only thing I wish I had done but hadn’t was to have the confidence to paint in the style I usually do rather than rushing to complete a piece to hand in, and should have considered the piece and the application of paint and how I painted the piece.

 

What were the most important things you learnt?

I have realised that I can and do have valued opinions as an artist, and I do have an academic enquiring mind because when I speak to the tutors I can articulate myself. I just need to use this articulation in my writing.

 

What reading was most influential?

‘Freud at Work’ by Bruce Bernard and David Dawson, 2006, I learnt a huge amount from this book regarding the working practices of Lucien Freud, his studio space and the dimensions of his work.

Paula Rego: Behind the scenes by John Mcewen, 2008 How Paula Rego works in contrast with Freud was a good comparison in the differences of approaches to how they create work and how they as artists are/were influenced.

“Art and Feminism” by Helena Reckitt, the arguments and discussions within this book has expanded my understanding of Feminism and how this theory has affected artists in the past and now.  

‘The Art of Reflection’ by Marsha Meskimmon , 1996.This particular book is interesting to read and understandable, the discussions are again evocative, the areas of interest are quite broad as well.

 

What support was most helpful?

The most helpful support was the writing support from Angela, and I would be interested to be involved in more of these sessions if they came available.

The paired discussions worked very well, and the variety and diverse discussions was interesting and gave a fresh perspective on the work I created.     

 Outline of Study Plan

I am going to begin the process of creating work, by starting off from unprimed canvas in which I stretch and then prime myself. In doing this I am in control of the materials from the start, and the basis of the application of mark making.

I will use the blogsite as the reflective summary of this module, this communication on the site will build up gradually into a more concise and descriptive reflection of the work. Furthermore I will be collating my notes, ideas and reflecting on these on the blogsite, hopefully by using this format I will be able to coutextualise my work in a more concise manner.

I am going to create work with an awareness of structuring the image, composition would be the basis of the work. The use of photography and computer enhance imagery will help me be creative and being inspired. 


Are there any skills you want to acquire or improve on?

Due to a change in my work pattern I am hopeful that I will be able to spend more time on the MA and especially on my reflections of my work and the technical aspects of the work, also commenting and exploring the theoretical aspects behind the work.

 
How will you reflect in more depth in this unit?

I need to gain confidence in my opinion and apply this in my writing and musings, furthermore I will be using my blog site far more, as I have been reflecting how I worked at University and I used to pour all my thoughts and I used to spent a lot of time reading journals and books really exploring the subject matter and I found this easier today in these journals, possibly due to the physical application of writing and images, and I feel that I need to apply this more in an electronic manner onto the blog site.

 
What new reading or areas of reading do think you’ll be doing?

As I have discussed with Angela during my tutorial I will be exploring the reasons why people are using Tumblr and the origins of this particular social network, the differences between Tumblr and Facebook.

Furthermore I want to read more on the idea of Identity and the psychological theory on identity in more depth. Furthermore I need to explore and research more artists and practices.   



   

  

Sunday, 11 November 2012

Paired Discussions

Within this module all the students have been paired with other students on the MA course to meet up once a month to discuss their work and to give and to gain advice regarding their practice.

June 2012

The first student who I had a paired discussion with was James, and at the time I was attempting to paint but trying to include text into the imagery, these pieces where not working and I really struggled to discuss the work, however I was able to give constructive help to James on how to push his work further, I suggested that James needed to take the sugar cubes outside into the larger world, and James was very supportive during this session and quite gentle with his comments regarding my work.


July 2012

 Sarah and I were due to meet up in July however Sarah had problems with the internet as she had no internet connection at home so we decided to communicate via email rather than Skype, at this particular time I had taken a series of photographs of myself within my small shower room and then I had worked into these images. I looked at the ready made work that Sarah had created and I suggested some artists such Gerard Richter, looking at his 'Atlas' website especially the black and white paintings and I also suggested other artists that would enable Sarah to extend her research. There email I recieved from Sarah and the main points of Sarah's response are below.

 Hey Jo,

Thanks for your feedback, I'm gonna look up all of the people you suggested when I get chance, I haven't heard of most of them so that's class cuz I am in a rut and need fresh stuff drafted in.
I really like the most recent images you sent me, I'll just give some feedback below if that's ok so.

The idea in the first photo-with your face in profile-of the ball dress that is too big and doesn't fit the body without the bra is really great. I especially like the angle that the image is from and the reflection angle, it's suffocating and full and introspective and intimate.
I think that you could do more with this idea of ill fitting clothes and the gravitation pull on the reveered aspects of the female form. Unfortunately so many people wear clothes that don't fit them that this is not immediately evident form your photo but when I read this and then saw it it was brilliant. Maybe amp it up with something that is specifically made for perfect young pert figure and get it a few sizes too small or something? Boned corset or something? That being said I like the low key nature of the way you are using the concept now, just would hate for it to be lost because of the majority of peoples poor sense of dress size. It's significant that you can't see your face in the reflection much, just your chest which is meant to be the conceptual focal point in a complex photographic composition, and actually is visually the focal point. Accident or no, nice work.
I also really like the etching/drawing you have done on the final two photographs. The scratchy lines with the black and white and close range and really graphically effective and create a kind of link between the torment of the subject trapped in self depreciating inwardness and the viewer watching helplessly. The lines seem on the surface so they link the sorrow and the sympathy or the subject in photo and viewer looking at photo respectively. The lines are erratic scratching attempts to conceal and recreate, conceal that which the subject wants to hide and finds disgusts/disappointment (face) in and recreate that which subject sees as different and so optional/alterable in others (body shape/bust). They are very provocative and the scratching abstracts them which makes them more interesting than straight up documentation.Very dark and effective.
I also really like the first painted image you sent; the kind of blue organ-y image. I don't know what it is but it suggested things like carnality, entrails, then the colour pallet suggests calm and clinical vs the supposed shapes suggesting the paradox of carnivorous and human and hair and blood and guts and sex.
There is a book I studied in Philosophy degree which I'm starting to look at again because of my interest in the domestic roles and objects in my own work and parts of it may be applicable to your work too. Its bit heavy going but is seen as one of the greats and is actually taken seriously even though it's by a female philosopher, of which there are practically none. It's called 'The Second Sex' by Simone de Beauvoir.


Reading the theory/philosophy might give you new ways forward to developing your visual work, once your ideas are strengthened and assured, and taken from the solely personal to the historical context you might see new ways of making your feelings about womanity and aging evident and relevant in different media and manners.
 
September 2012
 
Eleanor had a meeting in September and I was absolutely fascinated with the work that Eleanor has produced during this module 'taking the pencil for a walk' I found this session interesting especially when Eleanor discussed the issue of the fact that I have struggled to paint and what was interesting is how Eleanor commented on how unusual the composition of the photographs that I had contined to take within this module, compared to how composition is often used within painting and maybe this was an area that I could explore, furthermore Eleanor suggested that I should also attempt to sketch more not for the MA but for myself to keep creating without having to have a reason and to create blindly without being inspired by something visually.
A really thought provoking session.
 
October 2012
 
Once again I have meet up with James and during this session I felt that I was able to comment with more honesty and how I believe that the work that James has produced using text and his research has really opened up the work and it has become more extensive. James and I discussed my work and by this time I have been creating ink sketches, James discussed in depth the photographs of Emma and he suggested that there could be a sexual element to some of these images, which is an element that I have not seen in these pieces and noone has commented on this so that was another discussion point, we also discussed the compositional elements of the photographs which is becoming more highlighted on during this module.
 
November 2012
 
Tonight Ameila and met up on Skype and I explained  how I have had to drop out of the MA these last couple of weeks because of major work issues which thankfully have been resolved. This particular discussion mainly centred on the research aspects of this particular module and the essay that is required for this unit, Ameila's advice regarding using the Kindle app will be invaluable. I have been very impressed with Ameila's blog which is full of information and research and is well written and I believe that the extra sessions regarding research and writing practice has really been a positive influence on Ameila.  Furthermore we have talked about the work we have produced, and how Ameila does feel discouraged in producing more work along the lines of the furniture, and I feel that quantity of work is important within the MA which makes creating large finished pieces difficult.
We continued this discussion by talking how we will extend our work into the next year and how we will develop our work.

Sunday, 14 October 2012

Artists of interest


The book 'Freud at Work' by Bruce Bernard and David Dawson.

Published by Jonathan Cape, 2006

This book has been a marvellous insight for me into the working practises of Lucian Freud, not just through the interview with Sebastian Smee but the photographs showing his work, the sizes have been a surprise, the studio space in which he worked.

The conversation between Sebastian Smee and Freud and one of the first things discussed is the amount of time that Freud spent in the studio, even though he had not been well.
Freud stated 'Well, it's all I do. It's all I want to do. It's simply a question of keeping well, really.' (2006:11)

There is awareness of time running out for Freud, his failing health seemed to be a reminder that by not painting created a sense of a terrible waste of time.

This discussion talks about his relationship with Francis Bacon, which was very complex, actually it seems that a lot of Freud's relationship with other artists seem to be quite complex.

A statement given by Freud in relation to what he felt made a portrait, he states 'It's to do with the feeling of individuality and the intensity of the regard and the focus on the specific. So I think portraiture is an attitude.' (2006:31)

After this conversation the rest of book are images of Freud at work, paintings in progress, Freud actually painting. Furthermore there are photographs that show the models and the work in progress. The photographs have been taken by Bruce Bernard and David Dawson.

The photographs that show what the actual size of the paintings and I realised just how diverse Freud was, he was able to change dimensions to create a sense of tightness and clarity, I believe this is reflected in the Queen's portrait. This painting 'Elizabeth II in 2001 the actual size is 9in by 6in.



Elizabeth II by Lucian Freud 2001
9in by 6in

Another aspect of this book is seeing how and where Freud worked his studio really was grimy and for me I would really struggle to work in that type of atmosphere.

David Hockney 2002

This image for me is fascinating because looking at the actual size of the painting placed on easel of David Hockney. Everything around the room has an air of neglect and you can see the fabric which is strewn across the studio room which seemed to have been used in other work of Freud's.



This another image taken from this particular book, and Freud's studio in summer could be very hot and stuffy and he would often remove his shirt during these times, what does interest me is the apparent chaos of his brushes and paints, the paint marks splattered on the wall behind him is all so random and disorganised and Freud is dynamic and fluid in this image, and yet when you glance at how his shirt and tie is placed, seems out of place within this image.



Nan Goldin Born1953

Nan Goldin is known for documenting her surrogate family of friends as they engage in intimate, uninhibited, or illicit activities. These unusually lit images are frank confrontations with personal experience, frequently presented in poses that mimic the styles of the fashion world. Goldin visited that world through photographs she took for a New York Times Magazine cover story – “James is a Girl,” by Jennifer Egan – that appeared on February 4, 1996. King’s languid and mature pose in this photograph speaks of a teenager who has experienced much; it appeared in a cropped form on the magazine’s cover.

Nan Goldin has spent more than twenty-five years creating edgy portraits. In 1996 these startlingly direct color images were the subject of a mid-career retrospective organized by the Whitney Museum of American Art, New York, which traveled to Winterthur, Germany; Vienna; and Amsterdam, among other international venues. She has earned the Mother Jones Photography Award, a grant from The National Endowment for the Arts, and the Maine Photographic Workshop Book Award for Documentary Book of the Year. Born in Washington, DC in 1953, Goldin earned her BFA (1977) and 5th Year Masters Certificate from The School of The Museum of Fine Arts, Boston.


Nan Goldin’s work is blunt and her work is unforgiving not only to the viewer but of the person being photographed and the unforgiving nature is reflective within my recent images taken of Emma.

Furthermore Nan Goldin’s images do not come across as professional and there is no sense of predetermined aspects when the image is taken, rather the work is reflective of capturing a moment in her life and there is no contrition reflected.

Furthermore my images are imperfect and at times there is graininess due to the fact I do not have an expensive camera to use, however this does not detracted from the starkness of the images.   

    

Nan Goldin 1997





Holly Roberts

Roberts excels by rewarding us with her sensuous presentations of complex ideas that switch on our senses and logical facilities. Her slow-time pictures extend the most vital experience of photography, the interaction period between the subject and the maker, to express potential realities that comprise human consciousness and ask for a studied examination. Hopefully, Roberts fingerprints, that critical juncture where nature, knowledge, and knower intersect, will lead us to more carefully notice how vast, interrelated, and astonishing our world really is. Robert Hirsch.


 

30+ years of paintings, talked about one painting at a time: what went into the paintings, what I was trying to say, what was happening at the time of my life that I made the paintings. The paintings themselves are narrative, and this adds a little more to the story that they tell.


 

Lately I have been working into the photographs using inks and pens, furthermore I have been scratching into the pieces.

 Asking for Money - Holly Roberts

When looking into the work of Holly Roberts I do find her techniques really interesting which does relate to my work. One of her works ‘Asking for Money’ is such an interesting layered piece, and the complex characters that are revealed have an element of creatures/animals this piece that I do find curious. 
Bob Singing - Holly Roberts
 
Whereas the piece ‘Bob Singing’ is an simplistic piece and yet I find the marks and shading reflected in some of my photographs especially the ones that I took of myself and then these were worked into.

However I do find some of the pieces of Roberts a little bit twee and dainty at times, however this does not detract from the mark making and technical work that is reflected within her work.


As I have been creating ink drawings I have looked at the work of Marlene Dumas (b.1953) her work is also very raw and confrontational at times. She works from newspaper cuttings and photographs never from life. Dumas does not shy away from pornography, death, murderers she explores all aspects of human identity. Her paintings are loose and fluid which is how her compostions aspects of her work feel as well.  
 
Amy Blue 2011
 
"Stressing both the physical reality of the human body and its psychological value.Dumas tends to paint her subjects at the extreme fringes of life's cycle, from birth to death, with a continual emphasis on classical modes of representation in Western Art, such as the nude or the funerary portrait. By working within and also transgressing these traditional historical antecedents, Dumas uses the human figure as a means to critique contempory ideas of racial, sexual and social identity."